In my very early days as a blogger I recall a very early—like three o’clock early—morning accident when I caught a reader writing, and editing, a comment. I found the process fascinating. I watched as the reader carefully considered, changed, changed again, deleted and shifted tacks in crafting their message to me.
That is what writing is all about. Perfect words don’t flow in a constant stream from the brain to the page. We wish. After the writer is finished, however, the editor steps in. We all need good editors and in the age of print, we never got to see the editors hand. Editors don’t get bylines.
In the age of the Internet, that has changed. Words are edited in real time. An astute watcher gets to see the sausage made. That is what happened when an anonymous writer using the handle The Broken Ravioli caught the altering of a New York Times article on Senator Bernie Sanders. The lede for Proof That The New York Times Isn’t Feeling the Bern in Medium begins:
The New York Times seems to have inadvertently exposed its own political bias with a quiet, retroactive edit of an article originally headlined “Bernie Sanders Scored Victories for Years Via Legislative Side Doors.” The piece was published on Monday, March 14, 2016, a day before polls opened in five crucial Democratic primary states.
Written by congressional reporter Jennifer Steinhauer, the article reflects on the Senator’s strategy for legislative accomplishments over the past 25 years?—?often passing new measures by attaching them to larger bills.
By Monday afternoon?—?once many people, including Sanders himself, had already shared the article widely on social media and other sites?—?the Times evidently rewrote rather significant portions of the article. (No mention has been made anywhere that the article was retroactively altered.) Several new paragraphs were injected, while other wording was subtly changed to shift the praiseful tone of the article to one of shrugging ambivalence toward Sanders’s accomplishments.
The article caught the eye of Matt Taibbi who writes in How the ‘New York Times’ Sandbagged Bernie Sanders for Rolling Stone:
The New York Times ran a piece about Bernie Sanders Monday, a sort of left-handed compliment of a legislative profile. It was called “Bernie Sanders Scored Victories for Years Via Legislative Side Doors.”
I took notice of the piece by Jennifer Steinhauer because I wrote essentially the same article nearly 11 years ago. Mine, called “Four Amendments and a Funeral,” was a Rolling Stone feature. Sanders back then was anxious that people know how Congress worked, and also how it didn’t work, so he invited me to tag along for weeks to follow the process of a series of amendments he tried (and mostly succeeded) to pass in the House.
I came to the same conclusions that Steinhauer did initially: that Sanders was skilled at the amendment process and also had a unique ability to reach across the aisle to make deals.
Then the story gets interesting as editors—too often these days functioning much like a Congressional whip (see Frank Underwood) keeping the writers in line for the benefit of the people with the money—deleted and rewrote key passages in the original article to shift the message.
[T]he paper swiftly made a series of significant corrections online. A new version of the piece came out later the same day, and in my mind, the corrections changed the overall message of the article.
This isn’t journalism, this is propaganda.